Which piece of writing is best?
Q. Which piece do you prefer? One is more mild and the other is kinda heated with a club atmosphere lol,, don't base your opinion on the preferred genre please! Also,, just ignore the unnecessary cuss words lol. In the book club i wrote the pieces for, you had to include some swear words lol. Okay,, piece one is just a load of extracts: Oh, gross! She'd stepped in something icky. Beyond icky. It squished beneath her foot - a wet, gasping sound. Whatever it was, it was sure to ruin her pony-hair boots. Askel Geller lifted her heel and assessed the damage. The zebra pattern was stained with something brown and leaky. Beer? Whisky? Who knew? Here is the second extract: When Askel woke up the day after Saskia's bonding ceremony, she was lying in… [cont.]
Asked by yuik - Fri Apr 15 13:35:36 2011 - Books & Authors - 5 Answers - Comments

A. I like the first one best personally because party relationships seem pretty shallow and always end up with a mistake that someone regrets. Niether were bad though. The dislike for number two is strictly personal minus the fact that I had a difficult time trying to depict who was actually talking until I re-read it. Number one sounds pretty interesting though! Good names too! I love Geller for a last or first name! Bravo!/Brava!
Answered by Mat - Fri Apr 15 13:46:40 2011

A dance question (routine), curious guy need help.?
Q. hey guys I wanna ask how does choreographer remember their dance steps, pattern and combination to create a dance video. I'm curios about that. I wanted learn how they do it. Do they record every single piece? How ? Like playing an instrument there will be a note for you to follow but in dancing how do you tend to memorize these dance moves and be able to show someone else? of course u cant really remember them by heart when u just thought of it. and When will you be able to be comfortable and have fun with your dancing instead of having to worry about the dance moves in a routine. thanks.
Asked by CalebT - Thu Feb 12 16:55:27 2009 - Dancing - 2 Answers - Comments

A. choreographers have fantastic memories, and can often remember whole ballets or productions, years after they created them.
Answered by daydreaming - Thu Feb 12 18:50:53 2009

Can you guys help me out here?
Q. So I'm taking a survey for my psychology class on certain symbols and phrases meaning different things to different people... please state your interpretation of the following proverbs and say whether you agree with their meaning... then tell me your religion and wat country you're from. 1. the stone that sits at the very top of the mountain's mighty face is still never more important than the stones that form the base. 2. A single thread in a tapestry, though its color brightly shines, can never see it's purpose in the pattern of the grand design. 3. When all you've got is nothing there's a lot to go around. 4. To one lost sheep a shepherd boy is greater than the richest king. 5. though you may never know all the steps you must learn to… [cont.]
Asked by ModerateOrthodoxConservative - Thu Nov 18 22:14:12 2010 - Religion & Spirituality - 6 Answers - Comments

is this piece of writing good?
Q. is the following good enough to be in a book, i mean seriously? Here is the first extract: Oh, gross! She'd stepped in something icky. Beyond icky. It squished beneath her foot - a wet, gasping sound. Whatever it was, it was sure to ruin her pony-hair boots. Askel Geller lifted her heel and assessed the damage. The zebra pattern was stained with something brown and leaky. Beer? Whisky? Who knew? Here is the second extract: When Askel woke up the day after Saskia's bonding ceremony, she was lying in a comfortable bed under a patchwork quilt. Across from her sat an ordinary woman with ruddy cheeks and a quizzical expression, wearing a worn cashmere sweater and a wool argyle skirt. "Miss Murray?" Askel asked. What was her history… [cont.]
Asked by yuik - Fri Apr 15 12:33:22 2011 - Books & Authors - 3 Answers - Comments

A. 1) The word 'icky' put me off the first one immediately 2) You often mess up dialogue tags 3) What is wrong with the word 'said'? 4) The last one seems like a hideous, profanity filled, disgusting mess 5) Your grammar is off throughout I honestly can't tell from the small amounts of text if this should be written as a book or not. It's too short and seems like a draft to me. You need to rewrite these, though.
Answered by e.l - Fri Apr 15 12:44:07 2011

what are the step patterns of this folk dance?
Q. help me please...what are the step pattern of: 1. close step 2. bleking step 3. contraganza step 4. heel and toe change step 5. touch step 6. change step 7. skip step 8. slide step 9. plain polka please help me in answering this...i really need this ASAp.. thanks alot..
Asked by clarissa_cullen - Sat Feb 14 07:11:38 2009 - Dancing - 1 Answers - Comments

A. That's quite a list and it looks like you have little time, but you can find probably all of them by individually googling them. Include the word dance before each step or you'll get strange stuff. I've also included below a link to a site I like very much. It covers lots of stuff and has tons of dance instructions. I don't think it will help you now if you just want definitions, but many of the instructors there are excellent and you can learn a lot. As an old guy who learned to dance in junior high, I can tell you knowing how to dance--truly dance like you're clearly learning--has been a wonderful thing for me. Partners appreciate it and it can make you very popular at dance events. Good luck to you.
Answered by Eclectic - Sat Feb 14 07:34:58 2009

A dance sort of like the hustle?
Q. Want to know the name of a dance i learned from a club about 10 years ago. its kinda like the hustle right foot tap out 3 times, left foot tap out three times, then you kick your feet in front in a pattern of quick quick slow slow, then you cross as you step to the side twice then turn to do it in the other direction i met a really good dancer in a bar one time and he totally knew what i was doing, he didn't know what it was called either . i was once told it was the new york hustle, but i look that up and all i get is some kind of ballroom stuff. Thanks for any help never mind , i found it, it's called the detroit shuffle it's on you tube
Asked by Babarina - Thu Aug 20 02:30:37 2009 - Dancing - 1 Answers - Comments

A. Well done!
Answered by fmogofas - Thu Aug 20 04:50:55 2009

is this a good book report about Ancient Egypt?
Q. Hart, George Ancient Egypt Copyright 2004, Dorling Kindersley Limited Paddle doll, earrings, wooden cosmetic spoon, glass ear stubs, in the book Ancient Egypt mentioned about the pharaohs that Egypt was ruled by the pharaohs in the 3100 B.C. People in Egypt lived high up the land above the Nile from the Delta to Aswan. In agriculture Egyptians became farmers and began growing wheat and barely and also raise domesticate cattle. Also Egyptians built villages of mud huts in parts of the flood plain from the Nile flood. Farmers prospered and formed kingdoms, recent excavation in 3,500 B.C were already cities and had taken the first steps in inventing writing. In Egypt the desert was called the Red Land it covers about 90% of the people of… [cont.]
Asked by dayana d - Wed Aug 29 20:45:05 2007 - Egypt - 2 Answers - Comments

A. Whether this is good or not would depend on your grade level and whether this assignment is required to be written in English or not. If a translation from your language for Internet review, it is pretty good. If this is finished form and to be turned in as an English language report, it needs a lot of work. For instance, your first sentence reads, "In the book Ancient Egypt mentioned about the pharaohs that Egypt was ruled by the pharaohs in the 3100 B.C." This is very confusing as it is improperly worded for an English speaker. It would be better if written thusly, "In the book 'Ancient Egypt', the Pharaohs that ruled Egypt during the era of 3100 B.C. are discussed and examined." Also, the sentence, "In… [cont.]
Answered by robocop48 - Wed Aug 29 21:31:34 2007

Dance Patterns of the following?
Q. Do-si-do waltz waltz balance mazurka cross waltz quick step: quick-and-quick-and-quick-quick-slow (is this correct?)
Asked by RIOT! - Tue Jan 20 09:41:00 2009 - Dancing - 1 Answers - Comments

A. quick step i beleive is quick quick slow quick quick slow, not sure forgive me if im wrong, try this site:
Answered by Blessthefall's biggest fan! - Tue Jan 20 17:45:39 2009

what are the basic steps in carinosa?
Q. patterns in dancing carinosa?
Asked by Mark Joseff - Wed Jan 26 02:37:02 2011 - Military - 1 Answers - Comments

A. What exactly does this have to do with the military?
Answered by dankohner1 - Wed Jan 26 02:41:44 2011

Read me 2... ?
Q. All the way home we felt we had a chance To review the clouds before we were born And to invite a new game of can't Absorbed in the clouds a voice from afar said "With the right device you can make a pattern grow Or you can tune up your car" So we stayed on the train admiring the time As the lights of the city drew near We drank a little wine They were blurry and green outer space in between With a depth and a form unclear Then we saw it up ahead A flickering lantern lit up on the tracks In the rugs that had covered up the bridge From the banks of a river to the bed Of the valley upstream to the place we live The glass on the lantern cast back the sight Of a drive-in movie we drove by below We saw where we'd been in the pictures… [cont.]
Asked by Mike - Sun Sep 11 15:52:56 2011 - Books & Authors - 2 Answers - Comments

A. I like it =3
Answered by Tammy - Sun Sep 11 16:06:04 2011

New Moves in the Field tests?
Q. Has anyone taken any of the new higher level moves in the field tests? I'm planning to take my novice in June and was wondering if anyone has some comments from judges they would be willing to share. Also would it be possible to test the Dutch Waltz (yes the first dance test) at the same time or would there be no way I could be ready in time. I know the pattern and steps but I haven't been working on it. Same for the Canasta Tango. Thanks for any help!
Asked by Jana - Sat Apr 23 18:23:39 2011 - Ice Skating - 2 Answers - Comments

A. You'd really have to focus in all lessons and practices on the Moves and dances. Knowing the steps is only half the battle in ice dance; unless you have the rhythm and tempo down as well, it would be dicey. Novice moves is a difficult test, but we've had skaters pass the new version on the first try, so it's not impossible. The key criticisms that I've heard coming from the judges are mainly improper patterns and shapes. We were told at the seminars that the loop patterns were NOT to be judged like Figures, but the feedback indicates that the skaters are getting reskates on that pattern if the loop isn't a blade-and-a-half in diameter, perfectly rounded, no lean/tilt, etc. It would be a good drill to practice the Loop Compulsory Figure… [cont.]
Answered by JustMe! - Thu Apr 28 09:14:07 2011

Are these signs of Asperger's in my boyfriend?
Q. Hi there, I was wondering if my boyfriend has symptoms of Asperger's or some other autistic disorder. I'm sorry if I come off kind of ignorant/uninformed on this topic. I am just curious if he has it. I read up on it a little bit, and he seems to have some of the traits that were listed. he might not have enough traits to be classified as an Aspie or he might have outgrown them? personally, I think it is rather cool if he does/ did have it...I always thought he was a little different from others, but it's a good thing. he would go to the doctor to get an official diagnosis, but his mom doesn't want him to because she seems a little worried lol. but I don't think she should be worried if he does have it. if anyone here has Asperger's… [cont.]
Asked by - Fri Sep 24 16:56:51 2010 - Psychology - 3 Answers - Comments

A. Yes.
Answered by Nae No - Fri Sep 24 16:57:16 2010

how to do my spanish report?
Q. Salsa is preformed in clubs all over Orlando, better yet all over this country. Salsa is originally from Cuba, it is blended with spanish intruments as well as African instruments. The dance is sometimes refered to as romantic, or sensual. Salsa is said not to involve to much technique, making it somewhat easy on people ambitious to learn. Salsa is an important dance in Puerto Rico, Cuba, and many latin American countries. It was influenced by many other dances. It actually means ' sauce ' in spanish. Some say hot sauce, I can see why because the dance is energetic and has a spicy flavor to it. Important articles are important for this cultural dance. Like shoes, you make many moves and the shoes worn should be comfortable and worn in. The… [cont.]
Asked by nikki - Wed Sep 1 22:44:00 2010 - Languages - 1 Answers - Comments

A. Seems to be an english report about a spanish (latin) dance and not a report on spanish. I would give you an E for effort. A spanish report to me would mean a report on the nuances of the language or maybe reporting on illegals in our country. LOL
Answered by Chief Running Water - Wed Sep 1 22:53:17 2010

What do you think of my story so far?
Q. Btw im only 13 and i can take criticism so help me out and read on. May 26, 1647 I stepped up onto the wooden barrel closing my eyes as i did so i felt the mans rough hands brush past my face as he tightened the rope around my neck, i waited a few moments until the barrel was kicked from under me, the last thing i heard before death took me in his arms was "Alse Young i think i love you" May 26, 2010 I stepped onto the chair so i could hang up the brightly coloured disco lights, for the dance that was taking place in 10 days but it fell from under me, i closed my eyes i was falling when i finally reached the ground i opened my eyes to the most beautiful sight i had ever seen Charley Scott was sitting right there in front of me. &q [cont.]
Asked by Ash Green - Wed Aug 3 04:29:46 2011 - Books & Authors - 3 Answers - Comments

A. Okay first, half of the punctuations missing. You make the sentences way too long that when I'm reading it, not only am I running out of breath, I can't understand what's happening. You don't explain one part that's happening enough before you jump to the next thing that's happened and it makes it very confusing. Shorter sentences can be just as effective as longer ones e.g. He stopped. You can see from just these two words that he stopped suddenly: it was unexpected. This is only the beginning of your story, so instead of focusing on all the different things that are happening, try to focus on the setting and describing the area around the speaker. When you want to show that someone s stuttering, instead of putting "Whho are you?… [cont.]
Answered by Indie, xoxo - Wed Aug 3 06:35:32 2011

Does this sound good so far? (story writing)?
Q. There he was. In all his dark glowing glory, standing against the wall of hottest club in Chicago was Blake. He stood, as he usually did shirtless. Showing off the array of tattoo's that made their way across his toned chest. They showed the art of a punk, the angels of danger, and the curves of wit. Tonight she saw him with a cigarette, not many people saw him with a pack but everyone assumed he did smoke. And this was only a confirmation. His hawk like black eyes watched her. Yes they were black. Not a deep brown, black. Black wash jeans lay comfortably on his torso, held up by a silver belt. He watched her in a way that made Alice shiver from head to toe. They didn't speak much; only sentences here and there. And from his part just a… [cont.]
Asked by Ashley L - Tue Mar 31 21:48:34 2009 - Books & Authors - 1 Answers - Comments

A. i like it- it's very good, but a little confusing. keep working!
Answered by Anuta - Tue Mar 31 21:57:35 2009

Anyone else notice a pattern with Eminem's beats?
Q. So I was just listening to my i Tunes on shuffle and "Welcome to Detroit" by Eminem came on. After, "Same Song and Dance" by Eminem came on. I noticed that both songs have like a 3 sound loop (like the gun cocking on Welcome to Detroit and the step step clap on Same Song and Dance) anyone else notice this? I didn't really know how to explain it, I meant it was like triads of a certain sound? I don't know how to explain it.
Asked by yankeesryguy - Wed Mar 17 19:19:40 2010 - Rap and Hip-Hop - 6 Answers - Comments

A. same song and dance is produced by Dre. but i know what you mean. i can always tell if Em produced the song when i hear a song. he always has the simplest drum pattern..like hihats on every 2notes, same exact patterns of snares and kicks repeating over and over.. like patiently waiting, without me, hailie's song, till i collapse, mockingbird, and so many other songs have the same exact drum pattern repeating over and over. he also usually has the same structures in his beats. he has the introduction, main loops, then the instrumental slowly climbs to the climax, and then ends. like in lose yourself, the 3rd verse has that piano come in, hailie's song has the high strings at the end of his 3rd verse, patiently waiting also has that high… [cont.]
Answered by The Bourne - Thu Mar 18 21:48:36 2010

Practicing dance moves for dance lessons.?
Q. So im taking dance lessons now. Jazz dance lessons. We did what the instructors called (forget the name) that was basically two three point turns in a row with a grapevine at the end. They also did this thing.. kinda like marching. It went... Step out with your left foot, kick with your right. Step out with right food, Kick with your left. Then step to the side, and kick with your right foot to the side. Then turn around, and kick behind you with your left. If any of that made sense, my problem is that when i come out of the turn around/kick i always end up starting the step with my right instead of left again. Am i doing something wrong or does the pattern reverse every time?
Asked by n00b - Thu Nov 6 15:09:36 2008 - Dancing - 1 Answers - Comments

A. i think you might just be doing it wrong or i am cause when i tried it i started with my left
Answered by Amanda - Thu Nov 6 15:37:37 2008

what saucy latin dance has a pattern of 6 steps danced over 8 counts of music?
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Asked by Kiana S - Fri Jul 21 16:23:04 2006 - Other - Entertainment - 2 Answers - Comments

A. im guessing salsa
Answered by JinX - Fri Jul 21 16:26:08 2006

Ballet and ballroom dancers - your honest opinion of figure skating?
Q. I am a figure skater. I just wanted to know what the "dance world" thought about the "skating world" . . . our body positions and music interpretation. In ballet - for instance, your "arabesque" is our "spiral". I've heard of ballet dancers cringing at our spirals. In skating, some do lift their hip up, keep their upper back or head down (sometimes close to the ice) - it's undesirable in ballet, but considered "beautiful" on the ice. Ballroom - In ice dancing, our "footsteps" are nearly completely off from floor steps, though it is still about keeping tempo/mood and patterns. As they say, they are 2 completely different worlds - though some things will be similar, some things will… [cont.]
Asked by TripleBunnyHop - Mon Jul 23 10:36:27 2007 - Dancing - 10 Answers - Comments

A. Ha! I am a very good ballerina, going on 11 years. I absolutely love Ice skating. I think it is an amazing form of dance. Yes, if you were a ballerina you would be breaking some rules, but as you said it is beautiful on the ice. I know some of the greatest ice skaters in the world took Ballet, and you can tell the difference. Not because people who don't take ballet are bad. I guess it just helps with posture and hand form. I would love to BE and ice skater, but my mom actually wont let me because I would be breaking ballet rules. I don't agree with that but I do think Ice Skating and Ballet are different and shouldn't keep the same rules. I still think both are gorgeous!
Answered by Nails - Mon Jul 23 10:44:47 2007

in what website i can see the the ff.?
Q. Philippine folk dance its origin its costume Dance step pattern and importance of dance in their culture!!!
Asked by Migo - Tue Jan 27 06:12:40 2009 - Programming & Design - 1 Answers - Comments